hey gem! a Incoming review
So lets get started gem
First off gem i love the title of the poem and when i read it gem was like gem did pretty super good wit a poem like this and i told ari that you and her should collab again cause when y'all collab together the poem gets better but gem anyways when is your next poem going to be next time when ever you do it through and gem i also have a line to your poem enter silently and take my hand,
fake smile at me like you don't understand
that i understand and i have plans,
the light is purged from me by crueler hands
i'm here to enjoy these moments while i can,
and that means until i can't anymore like gem how you and ari's do y'all poems like anyway
My Compliment is oh my goodness gem how you get the edit like that and that is on most of your poems gem and i love the way how you talk about whats in your thought gem
How you can improve gem is the way how you and ari's work together y'all poems be like so when y'all collab that's when people get to read you and ari's poems cause now we want y'all two collab like always cause thats how the poems get good when ari's
is in your poem or something
Keep Writing Gem and have a nice day!!
-jay
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