hey 269609, this is a sad poem, i mean it really brings tears to my eyes and you are only 14 which is too young to be experiencing and processing such things. But in the matter of content your poem is flawless, i mean the message that you wanted to convey gets across smoothly and is not lost in words. the rhymes are beautiful and engaging. the guilt that is dripping from every line of your poem really makes me think about mortality and the concept of being alive and living. things done and said, sadly cannot be taken back, and the process of healing is different for different people, but death hurts no matter who it is and what hurts even more are the things that are left unsaid.
the end of the poem is fantastic and could not have been better.
keep writing
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