Young Writers Society

In the world of YWS, this inspirational poem is a rare find, given that most poetry/lyrical works found on the site are about the dramatic and darker side of life (which I have nothing against, mind you). And what I like about this poem/song here is that you take one idea (music) and expand on it, using the "losing yourself in music" idea as a way to provide a person with troubles a sort of solution to their difficulty. Yet at the same time it is also reminiscent of a love song, where the narrator and whoever the narrator is talking to can both get lost together, the word "lost" no longer being a feeling to shy away from, but something to look forward to. Altogether a really interesting piece. You did a good job.
In the line "be happy be free" you could possibly add a comma after "happy".

Hello @269609

This is amazing!

I can't really say anything bad about this its just all good.

One thing I may suggest though is don't use to many comas.
Using other punctuation would make it look way better.
(But that's your choice)

I can totally see this as a actual song that people would listen to.
I can sing it in my head which is kind of strange, but its a good thing.

I hope to read more work like this from you!

Sincerely Anma

Oh my gosh!!! I'm so happy I gave you my points!!! You used them for something amazing and useful.