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I'm thinking that the winking
Sun of the Laws of Physics
Has led to the rise in
Occurrences of solar eclipse,
And that has made Man blind
Of his own wrongdoings;
But Nature is kind
For, if it wouldn't have, we wouldn't
Have time to survive
Now, it's our turn to
Make Nature's trust revive.
O Nature, Nature, Nature, please forgive us,
I have conscience, that's why I'm making this fuss,
We do know, during our birth -- you were our nurse,
Oh, I know, we are being a hostile curse.
Betrayal - that's the thing we've done to you;
But there are people who know what's next in the queue --
Gone the old days, this's the age of Generation New
Who know they have few years - very, very few
To stop the greatest apocalypse coming to Mankind;
They have got the years because Nature is kind.
This wouldn't have even happened if We we sincere;
We are the only to make this noble world steer
Away, away, far from the clasp of Destruction
Which may happen due to the ever-increasing pollution
And due to the 'noble' Climate Change
By which Nature is taking its Revenge.
It’s happening fast whether you believe it or not;
The Earth may soon become as hot as a teapot
But the ‘Leaders’ are still asleep on their deluxe cot;
And, Nature’s going to show how much power it’s truly got.
Nature has given us billions of wake-up calls,
But we had had no intention to make pollution stall,
Nor Climate Change, neither Global Warming --
Because, we didn’t pay heed to Our Mother’s warnings.
I am wondering that if Relativity
Could show a little more Creativity,
Dimple time a little more,
So that we score the highest score;
And within the time, we’ll cast a spell
On the planet in which we dwell --
We shall overcome this obstacle,
If we can do it, it’ll be a Miracle!
It’s time for a Revolution!
Let us try to find a Solution!
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Hello rebel! Nicole here with a short review.
First impressions: this was a great poem! I really agree with the topic, and I think you presented it in a great way. I liked the way you made it rhyme, and made it flow pretty well.
Things you could improve: Nothing big here. You might want to add in some line breaks though. I think this would really help the impact this poem has, and help the reader understand what you are saying.
Really loved this poem!
Keep writing!
-Nicole
Hi there, Ellie-Mae here for a quick review!
I’ll give honest feedback, but nothing at all is intended to hurt or discourage you in any way at all! <3 So, without waiting any longer, let’s get right into it and digest the spectabulous piece of literary work!
good job with that!
but I do love the simplistically beautiful aspect of this ode… so it’s honestly AMAZONG either way!

Wishing you a happy day/evening/morning/night/whatever is applicable to your part of the world! First off, please remember that my reviews are my own opinions
First off, I loved the rhyming! That aspect made it a lot more enjoyable to read
In my opinion, I would try and add some larger words that are more descriptive- rather than words like “hot” “revenge” etc
I really enjoyed
Ellie-Mae