[Intro Music]
[Starts with faint heartbeat, grow louder.
Another heartbeat, grow louder.
Merge together & grow faster.
(Short trap beat, song starts)]
[Verse I]
Alone at night – it's rainin',
No sound, no light – it's drainin'.
Call me mad, call me sad,
But my lads, I'm painin'.
Then.
One day.
[Verse II]
In a choleric mood, so hollow I stood,
When I saw you pass by 'fore asking me why --
I stood as I cried, begging to die;
Then embracing me good, you understood
And said, "I'm here,
it's alright."
[Bridge I]
Before I found you,
Before you found me,
I had:
[Chorus I]
Nothing to live for, nothing to die for,
Nothing to smile for, nothing to cry for,
Nothing to lie for, nothing to vie for -
Love. X 3
[Bridge II]
Now that I've found you,
Now that you've found me,
I have:
[Chorus II]
You to live for, you to die for,
You to smile for, you to cry for –
You to lie for, you to vie for –
Love. X 3
[Chorus III]
(Chorus I and Chorus II together polyphonically)
[End]
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Hi! I love this piece! You have great rhythm and sweet word choice, and it really made me feel like listening to a song - I was nodding and my feet were tapping according to your rhyme! You said you produced this during a chemistry lesson, which is so similar to me - my mind wandering around when I'm so bored.
Anyways, GREAT work!
Hi @TheRebel2007 ~
Love the lyrics! Though I won't be able to listen to the song how you imagined- it's still beautiful. The lyrics feel like their are saying the artist found their muse to latch on to survive ^^
Just wanted to ask, does the line in the [Bridge II] say "Now that you've found you"?
Anyways, loved your work >.<
Thanks for the comment! Also, yes, thanks for pointing that out - I somehow made that weird typo. Just changed it!
You're welcome! You are really inspiring <",