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Dreams

by TheRebel2007


Dreams are something all of us have -

'Tis right and certain;

Sometimes wild, sometimes bad,

Sometimes good and burden.

Dreams are sometimes all we have -

When all feels plain pain,

Dreams are what then drive us far

And lead us back to the right lane.

Dreams are somewhat mysterious too -

As 'tis born all of a sudden,

Sometimes disappearing without an ado;

As if it all went away just for vain!

When all is said and all is done -

Dreams have built civilizations;

Dreams have built ships and engines;

Dreams have built trade and laser beams;

Dreams have built movies and spaceships;

Dreams activate all that we keep -

Ideas, passions and ambitions,

Dreams lead to what keeps the world stunned.


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Thu Dec 30, 2021 4:43 am
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LostWriter says...



Hey there! It's my first time writing a comment but anyways,
First of all, I personally love your works and this poem was really wonderful and I loved it!

"Dreams are something all of us have -"
"Dreams are sometimes all we have -"
It's fascinating how you played with these two sentences seriously!

"Dreams are somewhat mysterious too -
As 'tis born all of a sudden,
Sometimes disappearing without an ado;
As if it all went away just for vain!"
Oh honey, you don't know how much I personally relate to this and I'm pretty sure that I'm not alone, you really wrote people's feelings perfectly.

Overall this was a really good, perfectly structured poem and again, I loved it! Keep writing! And hope you have a day!! :D




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Wed Dec 29, 2021 6:26 pm
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Well crafted piece! Really enjoyed reading it. The entire poem captivating, how you said dream is something of a burden but at the same it gives people the confidence to do something, beautiful.

"Dreams are what then drive us far
And lead us back to the right lane."

This line is definitely my favorite, well written!




TheRebel2007 says...


Thanks for the review! :p



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Shayna Basu wrote a review...



Hey There !! Here for a brief review!!
Firstly I really enjoyed your poem.....It was an ordinary and yet an extraordinary poem based on people's ultimate treasure - Dreams . my personal favorite were these lines-:


"" Dreams are something all of us have -
Dreams are sometimes all we have -
Dreams are what then drive us far

And lead us back to the right lane.

Dreams are somewhat mysterious too -""

These lines really make us ponder on our night's fantasies.... Your poem's main intention -" We wake up from those dreams so that we can fulfill them" is beautiful conveyed...
You have highlighted the importance of dreams through your promising poem.
reflecting that some seek comfort and escape from reality through dreams while others come out of their comfort zone to accomplish their dreams !!!
Looking forward to read more exciting stories on Dreams and Dream chasers!!!




TheRebel2007 says...


Thanks for the review, Shayna! :p




"He who has a why to live for can bear almost any how."
— Fredrich Nietzche (Philosopher)