I'm fine burns in the fire of my heart
and drowns in the ocean of my mind.
I know you're gone
and now I have to lie..
I'm fine.
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Hi there my freind, sorry about that other thing so I am hear to do a nother review, so I think that this needs to be a bit longer don't you think, I'm fine burns in the fire of my heart this dos not make sens at all it is a bit con fousing to me, and now I have to lie.. just cass someone is gone dosent mean you hafe to lie at all, I'm fine. in this poem it sounds like she is not fine at all, so that is all that I can say about it keap up the good work.
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sorry that was a mess take
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review!
(The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in advance.(I will try to be humorous.)
Well then... I'm not sure if I can even do a review. But this was really good!
From what I can see you don't have any more grammar and/or comma mistakes. Keep up the writing, have a good day.