Salut! I've been learning French for awhile so I decided to try checking this out to test my reading skills and I actually understood a good amount. I'm not sure what your own background in french is, but I see you used google and well I think it messed up.
I'm not fluent either so some of these could be wrong, especially because I'm on winter holiday and haven't spoken much french in two weeks. IDK, but at least these are the things I noticed (Ignore any you personally know are right)
Faire des choses que je pensais ne jamais faire.
This one I'm most sure about, and its that ne should be before pensais because negatives always make a sandwich around the verb.
Another thing is you don't use one tense, but many. I'm pretty sure you want it to be in past tense, and you mainly seem to use imparfait, but you do use passe compose in part.
Along those lines, I think I saw someplace with improper conjugation, but now I can't seem to remember where or find it. I'd just double check if I were you.
I love your poem though, it's really awesome!
Yeah anyway, I'm not sure how helpful this review is, but I'm hoping you'll find some use out of it, even if it's just to laugh at my limited french skills. I probably should have gotten my brother who is in AP french to help me, but I didn't think of that until now, oops. Feel free to ask questions about what I've said.
Bonsoir- Junel
I don't understand much french so I used Google translate but the poem itself is very beautiful.
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