Hey there. Kanome here with a review. Let's get started, shall we?
First off, this poem brings out a lot of emotion. What I got from it was sadness, hurt... And I feel really sad for the person or anyone for that matter who feel this way. Whoever is feeling this way, I wish I could really help them, speak to them and listen to their feelings.
Anywho, there isn't really much to critique on grammar or punctuation wise. So that's good, right?
Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more of your writing. Keep writing and enjoy your day!
- Kanome
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