Hi there Thisislegacy I have come to right a nother review on you poem, so lets get strat into it, stranger, stranger, in my mirror okay so the foerst thing is that I think that you only have to say stranger wones I think, won't you show me where i went. this does not make sens at all to me, stranger with my wicked eyes, with this I think that you should say stranger with wicked eyes so no my cos you are not the stranger our you, a tainted smile, okay what does tainted meen egsaktley, stranger, where have i gone you seem like you are talking to your self hear in this part, and what is your name? so now you are talking to someone else not you see it is all swapping from you so someone else, was I easy to steal? this is a bit stanch to me, A/n Did I express the emotion well with this? How can I make it better? with the A/n what dose that say coss I can not read it, so that is all that I can say about it so keap up with the good work.
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