Ayoooo Thisislegacy! Aleta here for a short, brief review. I'll just talk about what I felt or got from this poem. The conflict between wanting to die and leave this world but also wanting to not do it so they may not let their family members grieve and to not leave the sky is quite strong here. It's a great, prevalent theme. The conflict is what makes this poem good. The ending especially got me because the speaker said earlier that they don't ever want to leave and want to forever look at the pretty sights of the sky but that also the stars would welcome them. The lack of passion in the beginning compared with the passion displayed in the colors of the sky was great. Your poem had a lot of conflicting ideas and things running amock which really made it an interesting read.
Cheers!
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