Hi there it is me again, I am hear to do a review on your poem as yashall, so this one is a good length this time so that is a good start, blaring their radios to not hear. Okay I think that this should say blaring their teaves to not hear. Coss people now days don’t really yous radios eney more, Broken people with no one to care, with this I feel like you are missing one word so it would say, Broken people with no one to care for, see I am just adding to it, Broken people sleep so peaceful. To me broken people do not sleep peacefully at all, Broken people, broken people you have said broken people way to many times, so that is all so keep up the good work.
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