felistia

I would love someone to review this please. It's about a dragon called Zoltar and he is on a mission to save his tribe from extinction.

The first part in the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar returns to the shadow lands.

Hisster and Zoltar go to see the howler dragons

Who are these dragons?

Meeting the chief

Hisster has to make a deal with Zoltar

Into the Mist

Zoltar meets a lone dragoness

Zoltar goes to look for the map.

What caught Zoltar?

A short fight with Shiraku and a strange dream

Whispering

Another strange dream

A surprise meeting

Forest raptors

The wisp talon village

Zoltar tells Emerald the truth

Emerald meets Shirku and Felistia

We learn more about Felistia's past.

Where are Emerald and Shiraku?

Break down

An ambush

Will the three dragons make it? Will Zoltar, Felistia and Shriken escape the Fangtar?

All is silent in the Wind Talon Kingdom. Not a dragon stirs from their sleep. They can't see the enemy stalking through their midst.

We meet the main character; Malanka the Lightning Talon.

Battle training. Lightning and Flame. Thunder and Talons.

A tragic happening

Is Darlarth alright and we have a surprise visit by someone Malanka holds close to her heart.

Malanka trains with her Father.

A Dragonet is lost in the Ziptar Woods as an electric storm rages over head and the NightMouth stalks from the shadows, thirsty for dragon blood.

A Dragonet is lost in the Ziptar Woods as an electric storm rages over head and the NightMouth stalks from the shadows, thirsty for dragon blood.

A thundering roar ripped through the night air. Scorpus decided that it was coming from the east of the island and started to move towards the sound.

Red glowing eyes staring straight into your soul and sharp bat-like ears tracking every move he made. A shiver ran down Zoltar's spine.

But, bringing the Howler Dragons into it could just make things worse. You know what happened the Lightning Talons. I don’t think this is a good idea.

The figure’s eyes were like burning pools of red flame that gleamed in the darkness of the room, a raging fire that could swallow your soul forever.

I am Krakatoa, leader of the Howler Dragons. Why do you not bow?

If you don’t return within a year, the Shadow Talons will have to announce war against the Moon Talon tribe. You have until next autumn.

Suddenly there was a splash from below Zoltar. He flinched as the large, dark shadow of a slender sea creature passed underneath him.

Felistia was standing in the far corner, her scales gleaming like white gold in the flame’s orange glow. Next to her was a burly Sea Talon.

Suddenly there was a crash from behind him and something leapt onto his back, knocking him to the ground. “Don’t move,” the something hissed.

One false move and I’ll send my fangs straight through your neck. The poison is fast acting and you’ll be dead in a few seconds, so don’t try anything

Suddenly something seized his neck and slammed him to the rock floor, making his head spin. “Who are you!” the dragon demanded.

But we can’t trust him. He’s a Shadow Talon.

The sea of scowling faces bore down on Zoltar as he walked through the hazy town. Dragons were snarling and growling at him.

Flexing his talons, Zoltar crouched and with a mighty roar he leapt over it, catapulting into a green ball of scales.

Emerald looked him slyly, “Oh? And what sort of issues do you have to take care of?”

“Hey. You two,” one of the Wisp Talons shouted.

“SOME DRAGONS!” Shiraku thundered. “Let me rephrase that,” Zoltar quickly backpedalled.

Zoltar could hear the Fangtar’s angry roars echoing through the forest a few miles away. They had to hurry.

"F-Felistia?" Zoltar started shakily, dreading the answer he was going to get, "Have you decided whether you want to go back to the Ice Kingdom?"

Our group carries on across the continent of Megalonia on their way to the Ice Kingdom.

“I will not let you steal the Thunder Opal. It belongs to my kind, not a scum sucking Shadow Talon like you,” Felistia snarled.

They’d nearly reached their home on the far side of the mountain when the earth began to shake.

“You m-must go on,” Zoltar hissed through gritted teeth, “We don’t have much time. It’s coming.” “What? What’s coming?” Mouzan asked.

As if sensing his stare the Shyfu turned their gaze and fixed him with their pitch black eyes, hissing in their shrill voices.

Zoltar’s sharp hearing picked up on the faint knocking of claws on dirt as a shadow slid pasting the tunnel outside his room.

Straining his ears, Zoltar hurried towards the sound. “…Yes, I know it wouldn’t work Hisster. The island isn’t large enough.”

After a long break from this story I've come back to it. In this first chapter we meet Zoltar the Shadow Talon and his tribe.

Three dragons are walking through an unknown forest when a thundering roar rips through the night air.

Break down

The Shadow lands

Zoltar's off to search for Emerald and Shiraku.

This is the second part in the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar and Hisster travel to the forbidden hills.

This is the third instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar meets the howler dragons.

The fourth instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire. Hisster and Zoltar meet the chief of the howler dragons.

This is the fifth instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Hisster is wrong.

This is the sixth instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar is attacked.

The seventh instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Will Zoltar live.

This is the eighth instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar finds the shadow talons.

What caught Zoltar? Reviews welcome.

The tenth instalment to the Search for the Ruby of Fire series. Zoltar is attacked, again.

We find out a little about the sea talons past.

Zoltar has doubts about the shadow talons.

Zoltar investigates the beasts cave.

Zoltar meets an old friend.

Zoltar meets some creatures in the forest.

Zoltar finds the wisp talon village

And our adventure begins

Funniest chapter yet.

The beginning of an adventure.

Zoltar is on his way towards the moon talon kingdom.

Shiraku catches something for breakfast.

The group of dragons are on their way to the Sulphur Swamps to get a Highlang plate.

Zoltar and the others find the Highlang.

The Highlang attack

What will Zoltar do

The group make their way towards the ice kingdom, but there is tension between them.

Betrayal

Tension

Was Zoltar right to trust Felistia?

Zoltar tells Felistia.

How will Felistia react

Felistia and Zoltar are flying into the ice kingdom, but will they make it or is there something waiting in those harsh snows?

Ambushed

Who are these dragons?

Where are these dragons taking them?

The ice talon palace

Zoltar and Felistia are inside the ice talon's palace.

Felistia's past is revealed

Questions answered

How will they escape

a plan to escape

An escape plan.

The escape

Will Felistia and Zoltar escape the ice kingdom alive?