Young Writers Society

Honestly the poem is well written; really expresses how one had moved on from a toxic relationship and is moving on with life, I can relate to it and at times one needs to let go of all the toxic relations surrounding them and look forward to some positive vibes in life. It may take some time but with time you need to be strong and go out there and leave all the toxic relationship behind.

Keep up the good work.

I want to say this as least bit disrespectful as possible because Im going through the same stuff with my parents, what they did is unforgivable I left my mom, my dad left me bla bla bla I mean no disrespect



I really like this poem, Because the words of choice give me vibes that you were stranded and you are now found. I say this because you say
"I used to feel like I was drowning

but now I finally feel free. "
and that is beautiful. I connect that to your authors note where you said "I've come a long way from where I used to be when I first got out of my mother's house. " and " She wants to get back in my life and I won't let her." I connect the drowning and she wants to get back in my life, I won't let her as she was the reason you were drowning (not specifically), and now that your free her text is her trying to pull you back in.


This has inspired me to write about my past. In fact, I think everyone whos reading this should as well.

I want to say this as least bit disrespectful as possible because Im going through the same stuff with my parents, what they did is unforgivable I left my mom, my dad left me bla bla bla I mean no disrespect



I really like this poem, Because the words of choice give me vibes that you were stranded and you are now found. I say this because you say
"I used to feel like I was drowning

but now I finally feel free. "
and that is beautiful. I connect that to your authors note where you said "I've come a long way from where I used to be when I first got out of my mother's house. " and " She wants to get back in my life and I won't let her." I connect the drowning and she wants to get back in my life, I won't let her as she was the reason you were drowning (not specifically), and now that your free her text is her trying to pull you back in.


This has inspired me to write about my past. In fact, I think everyone whos reading this should as well.

Hi Thisislegacy,
I'm here to review this amazing poem. First of all, you really shouldn't worry if you expressed your emotions well enough. If you didn't tell me I wouldn't have thought that you had difficulties writing down your emotions. I couldn't find any more grammar mistakes than the ones that have already been shown to you. It's a really great poem so I can't say anything negative about it.
Hope you are doing better now,
MoonIris.

Hey, Thisislegacy, I'm Lee.
This poem is really well-written, and it clearly comes from the heart. Throughout it I can sense the bubbling emotions and the sense of freedom you have achieved. While I can't say it's relatable, it does strike a chord in me. If you ever feel like talking, you can always shoot me a PM or post on my wall! <3

Okay. While I said I liked the poem, you did say to tear it apart, so I'm going to nitpick. I'm sorry if I come out as too critical.

it's been spoken so many times

I'm no longer in the shadows of my doubt,

There's your side and mine,

and the side of the truth.

All the evil things that you have done,

the freedom that it has given me.