you test all limits
you break all bounds
just by being you
you take all attacks
all hurts and pains
so hats off to you.
if you can jump
gravity can be beaten
most likely by you
to represent how
impressed i am
with you
i forgot all caps
for a minute
caps off to you
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Hello Horisun,
All caps off to you for writing such a funny poem. I liked how you left the capital letters out, it really adds to the effect of the poem. It brought forth a strong meaning, one of letting lose and breaking the bounds of capitals.
Also the short lines were really nice to read, it added to the rhythm. It also just didn't drag it out more than it needed to be. Overall your poem about capital letters was fun to read. I really enjoyed it. Anyways, keep on writing and have a great rest of your day!
- Stellarjay
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Hey I hope this review finds you well. <3
I'm going to point out your lack of capitalization- no I like it- the style is fitting for the poem teehee. I like how you are talking about why you did what the person asked. 'I respect you, so I'll try this for you. Just this once. ' It gives the poem a sardonic yet fond warmness. And I absolutely adore that. I do not see any misspellings. I do not see gramatical errors. I love the flow, the way you broke the poem up makes it a smoothe read with certain phrases having more feeling to them, it breaks the poem up like thoughs, only the most important parts of the train of thought have that extra emotion behind them. 'with you' Is an example it has that fondness. 'most likely by you' Has a fond yet sarcastic feeling. I just like the perfect way you broke the poem to release the feeling behind the words.
I enjoyed this peice and had been planning to review it for a while now. :> Glad I got the chance.
Much love,
Shadow
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Hiyo! This is Haileys review for an Amazing work. Hi! So wow. This is super good. I love it. Got to say that the whole thing was really good.
"if you can jump
gravity can be beaten
most likely by you"
This has to be my favorite part. Your work really flows. This work is worded really well and has to be my favorite of the last 10 I have read. So thank you, The writer for this amazing piece.
"you test all limits
you break all bounds
just by being you" Also this part really stood out even though it was the beginning. It was good.