This was a very beautiful poem. I loved the imagery you used and your word choice makes the poem so powerful. I like the carefree ending, how the person makes up their mind that they will never know the answer to their question. That they are not going to let their unanswered question stop them from having ideas.
"Its not a flower, its not sweat,
Its the feeling I get when I fret."
For some reason I feel like the last word fret doesn't really fit in with the other words in this line. I don't know why, that's just my opinion so feel free to discard that.
Overall I really enjoyed your poem and the ending was very good. Your words packed so much power in them and the imagery you used was perfect. Can't wait to read what you write next.
Carpe diem,
LUNARGIRL
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