Hey there, casa !!
This is Eros here with a review for this beautiful piece of short poetry of yours, on this special occasion of Review day !
Happy review day
Firstly, the title of the poem is very unique. It suits the theme of the poem very well.
I like the way you have described everything and gives the poem a touch of romance...
The whole poem glides and flows smoothly with ideas linked to each other through them small sentences. The choice of set of the words I also very suitable and apt.
The story behind the poem is so unique and Amazing. I liked the poem very much.
The poem is short and there lies the talent. It requires special skills to express everything you feel using as little words as possible. And that is the speciality of this poem of yours.
No grammar mistakes and no punctuation issues too.
I loved the poem.
Keep writing such awesome poems and stuff and we would love to keep reading them and reviewing them !
Have a great day / night !
~Eros.
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