Young Writers Society

Hello, Shikora here with a review.

Let's get to it shall we.

Okay to start of this was a really amazing poem I thing you wrote it very well, you did it in such away it felt more like a story then anything else. And there is nothing wrong with that, to be honest it make reading this a lot more fun, and interesting.

I like the name you have chosen for this poem slash story. It got me thinking so I had to come and check out your poem, and once I got reading I couldn't bring myself to stop, until the end of the story sadly.
But getting your readers attention like that is really good. That is something you want. I mean this like was really good.

"You've came to my chamber many times, but always fled before I could open the door."

Waiting in the shadows for you to decide that the time was nigh.

Dear Casanova,

This is a very interesting piece. Though I am left wondering, and yet a little confused, I find myself pleased with what you have written. I think it is interesting, and maybe my attention was slightly elsewhere, but I would love to hear about your meaning behind the piece. It is very beckoning, and I find it interesting that only one speaker is in quotations - as I assume (or I read it as so) that there are two speakers present. I would love to hear more about your piece, if you could explain in reply.

Though I did not feel as if the piece gave much of an explanation of the speaker(s) and their relationship to the piece, I feel as though it does not need it, interestingly.

I would love to hear about the meaning.

Also, I wonder if you meant to put "reel" instead of "role" in the second to last paragraph?

- B