That poem is a deep one, and if it truly happened to you I will give you my whole-hearted sincere sympathy, to have a loved one yanked away from you in such a sad way. <3
I respect this poem but, I also feel obligated to tell you this, you could never have known that this tragic event would ever have taken place, so it is not logical to blame yourself. I know it feels logical, but it isn't, the truth is you would have never hurt her if you are hurting this much because of this tragic event.
I will now begin my review. I like how you explain the heavy feeling of sad words with meaning behind them, it is descriptive and portrays its purpose well. You also describe the feeling of losing someone well, the emptiness it leaves. I understand how you feel that people don't fully understand and can never feel full remorse or sympathy for you, but that isn't true anyone that lost someone close that loved them in anyway could and will feel genuine remorse and sympathy for you and you loved one. The poem is very deep and personal and thank you for being so open with us all and sharing this beautifully tragic poem with the world of poetry. Keep writing, but stop beating yourself up. I hope the overwhelming remorse grows into sad but fond memories.
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
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