wow nice job very detailed
So hey there Audy. It's just lizzy dropping by real quick, so without a further ado, let the reviewing begin.One quick note, poetry isn't my best thing when it comes to reviewing and you are obviously very good at writing. My apologies in advance if I mess up but I'm used to reviewing poorly written stuff.It took me a couple reads through and dropping off at your poem a couple of times, before I collected my thoughts enough for a complete comment. There are still some things that I'm not sure on but they don't really effect the rest of these notes. *tosses random, somewhat important questions into a spoiler*
This is the first poem i've reviewed since being on this page & i have to say, it was really good. It really gets the reader thinking and involved in the lines. Keep it up! You got this!~Phantom
I envy you for being so good at poetry and I also love it because you're so good at poetry.
teach me how to poetry ;-; because like woah xD
I went to sleep reading this with a sardonic smile on my face, and I woke up the same, and now I'm eating rice the same. The analyses to be had here are both delicious and potentially overwhelming at times, but as a serial re-reader, the
I don't think that I can handle this right now. Just sayin'. d:
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