Purple Hair

Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day!

This is a very sweet poem that creates the feeling of reminiscing or love which draws the reader in quickly. I love the idea of looking for a new perspective on an old tire swing. This creates the feeling of old and new joining together for a better place which acts as a powerful message that runs underneath the sweet simple nature of the poem. The use of words like flutter help to create a soothing atmosphere for the reader that helps them flow with the poem. The ending was a bit strange, if you don't mind me saying, which I guess creates a magical(?) side to the story. You always have an interesting format to your poems which makes them stand out well. I like how you separate the mention of the tire swing from the main structure as it helps it stand out showing the importance of the occurrence. The only thing that I am a little confused about is the use of description for the arm. Why did you say veined arm? Is this important to the story? Apart from that this poem was a really good read and I enjoyed going through it to explore its secrets and patterns. Overall an amazing work and your talent does not falter!
Keep writing and all the best,
Godly

This poem as as magical as it was confusing! (not really confusing, but more like, odd)
In the beginning I got the feeling that this was about an old couple returning to the spot where they first met, or something like that. (Like you see in movies)
Later, however, I go the feeling that maybe... The characters were looking back on past moments they've had together? (Maybe?)
In any case, I enjoyed this all together, so it's been a pleasure!

~The dark one.