First, Hello there! And Wow.. just wow.. I love mermaids and this was just, well awesome C:
It had a good build up to the end. It left me wanting to read more.
"There's a mythology
if a virgin were to drown,
she'd reborn as mermaid"
Honestly, I had a bit of a laugh at this one, its so good, I love it!
Thanks for making something fun and interesting to read.
Continue the good work!
~ WitnerBites
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