Young Writers Society

Wow!
This is a great poem you have here - you really explore the feeling of love and the feleing of being in a relationship with someone you think the world of. Your language and imagery feel very immersive as if you are the character experiencing the emotions you are conveying here - so well done! My only suggestions for improvement, would to be add a short section to the end, maybe tying the poem up like:

And soon I felt like,

Our love is greater than Romeo and Juliet,

We lay beside each other in the starlight,

Wondering if our future will hold the best,

Let's stay with each other tonight.

If you added a section like this, then this poem would be fantastic (this is just suggestions of course, your work, you do whatever you feel as though is best for you). But aside from that, well done and keep writing!

this was a great one.

That you are more than words can surmise

Than the love from maternal relationships

But instead love hearts and diamonds