Young Writers Society

I really liked the way you narrated the poem but it lacks impressive or heart winning words and sentences. You are not wrong in anyway, except silly punctuation mistakes but I would love to see a tiny little improve ment in your choice of words.

I wasn't much willing to write a review at this point of the night but your poem about would actually draw anyone and would actually force them to write a review.


I really hope to read amazing content from you in coming days. You do have the potential but you just need to channelize your writing potential and after that I can say and I do believe you will get quite a good amount of fame.

I hope my review helps you and you do concentrate on the former by reading more books and developing your vocabulary.
Thank you.
Bye!!!!

no. i couldn't resist myself from reviewing it. although I am not having that time, but I will try to provide you with an honest review.

well, i was quite confused about the reason of why she would never do all this again until the last. but when you revealed it, it was awesome. i genuinely liked your poem. you nailed it as usual. i have a few suggestions to give-

For now her face is naked and bare

For now her friends come round to her home

For now she wears trainers and hoodies

it's awesome. i will review when when possible