Young Writers Society

What a poignant and beautifully crafted poem - your language and imagery have captured the feeling of 2020, now including early 2021 really well. Your writing shows a high amount of relatibility which I think is fantastic seeing as we all continue to endure lockdown and the challenges it brings - you should share this work as much as you can! My favourite part of the poem are your last eight lines, you really embody the common feeling right now, and how filling our time, can be done by good things.
Honestly, I have no improvements for suggestions. It's a great poem, and you're an extremely talented writer, so please keep writing!

Wow! Wonderful poem! It is a complete package with many intricate details, and your words have the potential to arouse allot of hope in the readers. I really liked your use of vocabulary. I have seen many poems on the year 2020, I have written one too, but this one is very different and unique, I felt. It doesn't particularly talk about the pandemic and its consequences, but how to cope with then, which I appreciate. I loved how you used alliteration in "create creation", and also it is a very unique way of putting what you mean. My favourite phrases :
"The siege of new light"
"The feud of a crisis"
"Muffled by Mother nature's wails"
"My ideas weaved together to create creation"
Although I feel you could have used punctuation a little more. Overall, LOVED IT!

Hello Illy7896,
Just here to say that this poem was lovely ^-^ I hope you are doing well in these hard times <3

this is awesome. i think you wrote this poem just after waking from sleep( although I might be wrong. please consider then)

My ideas weaved together to create creation
i think this line should be - my ideas weaved together to create the creation. it sounds better. what do you think?

And if the apocolypse finishes

I think it should be - And if the apocalypse finishes.
There is a spelling mistake. Apart from these, I have nothing more complaints.

Overall, it's very good. It reflects the rising of a new hope. I liked it. These are mere reviews. If you want to take the suggeztion you take, if you don't like, don't take. I hope I havd helped you through this review. Thanks