i genuinely loved it! time for reviewing. let's try if I can
The silence is a traitor to my ambition
well, first of all, when I read the first line, I had a sudden urge to know your ambition because to me it seemed like that you wanted to talk about it only. gradually, when I read the rest, It didn't happen. it was something different. that s totally fine. i don't have any complaints about that. but, I think you could include your ambition in the poem. i have no other complaints.
it was an enjoyable read. hope, this review helps you. take the suggestions that are worth it and ignore the other. thanks for the read.
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