Poetry can come
in many different ways...
Some of them don't rhyme -
and I ask, why this phase?
~
I always fail,
at poems that don't rhyme.
They end up in the trash-
they waste all my time.
~
Sure they're emotional,
they definitely show it.
But when it comes to non-rhyming
I'm not a poet.
~
Most people are good at it,
but mine always end bad.
"Band-aids are for wimps"
was an end, one had had.
~
I'm not being mean-
I have nothing against free-verse.
Just sometimes I wish
They'd take a ride in a hearse.
~
(And run off a cliff,
and wreck in the tree tops.
And then catch on fire,
and forced to eat rag mops.)
~
My non-rhyming poems,
I don't have much to say.
But I'd take rhyming ones
any time of day.
(A/N: I tried to keep spaces between, but they won't stay when I publish... :( )
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Greetings! This is new for me (reviewing poetry), but I'll give it a gander!
It's a little funny how you would expect a poem about not liking to rhyme would be not in rhyme....? Or maybe not, I don't know. (It would be ironic, though!)
For me, the second-last verse is completely random. Not unnecessary, but random. I like it. It's funny and I think it makes sense. To me.
I really don't have much else to say other than that this is cool and a good poem. This is strange because I don't really like poetry. But I liked this one!
I have probably been no use to you, but I guess that knowing that at least one person likes this is good. (Or several people... You get the idea.)
~Holographic Ladybug
Hey there! TwilightMuse has come to review!
I feel like this line doesn't work very well. The "had had" just doesn't fit. I understand that it rhymes but there is probably a better way to say it.I found this adorable and funny, a very well done poem all together.
It might just be me but I don't really understand what this part means. Maybe another line would work better?
I really like this as an ending, I think it's a concise way to end and it fits very well
Great poem! Can't wait to read more from you!
Nice! I read this like it was a beatbox battle.
Don't really know what you mean by (this phase) Are you trying to say it doesn't rhyme?
That's it!
I don't have much to say
But I will write any reviews for you
any time of the day!
Bye and keep writing with your great mind!
~MrMuddyPig!
Hi Felistia here with a short review.
Ha ha. That was clever and funny, a bit like what I meant to do with my I Hate Math one, but much better. This is almost perfect. The only problem I have was that I think in the line (they'd take a ride in a hearse) it felt a little forced. My favourite part was the ending. It was a neat way to finish the poem.
Have a great day/night
Okay, I'll look into that!
Thanks for the feedback!! 