Opposites

I honestly love this from start to finish. It was enjoyable and very amusing. I am guilty of being the same kind of person when it comes down to someone I might have some slight negative feeling towards. This poem was highly relatable.

The rhyme scheme is perfect! The beginning started with a funny use of a couple of made up words. The ending was my favorite part! I see nothing wrong with your poem and I highly recommend you to keep up the great work.

Overall, I love it and I hope to see more work from you in the near future.

Cause honey, whatever you have,
I'll want the opposire.
Oh, I love this poem. It is sooo me. The rhyme is beautiful and the humor is a brilliant add. I've no suggestions. The spontaneousness of this is great. It's a great poem and my new favorite, I think. I'll definitely be reading mkre of your work. Bravo. Very good. Brilliant. Especially since I can't write poetry to save my life, hahahahahaha.

Very good! I enjoyed that. As i read I could tell there was a humorous tone to it. I liked the rhyme scheme it added to the humor in my opinion. I don't really have any suggestions. When I read the line, "my oranges and hairs." I was thrown off by the randomness. I imagine it is written about someone you don't like and you just trying to show that you don't care.

Anyways, this is a great piece. Keep up the good work.

Excuse me while I go grab some fruit...