Hello Tuesday here for a review.
I like to begin that this poem truly deserved the spotlight. I liked the poem as a whole because it has a message as to people since we see all colors, just some that aren't there. Also it gives the reader a chance to use their imagination when they read a poem like this. I enjoyed the message you put into this poem and the questions you asked in this poem.
Nitpick(s):
The only thing I could suggest fixing here would be would of all should be would be since it shortens it and makes more sense.Imagine, the flowers would of all been black,
and the the sky would be all white.
Nobody thought much about it.
Back then, it was a normal sight.
Overall, I think this is a good poem that conveys a message to many people. I enjoyed this greatly and good job at writing it.
Farewell,
Tuesday
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