Did you know that in
driveways you don't drive.
In parkways you don't park,
(and one plus one is five).
~
Fiddle Feimer had a horse
and named it Clyde.
His pig was jealous, so it
took the horse's hide.
~
And what about princesses
getting stuck in those towers?
Or about the princes with long hair
who would comb it for hours?
~
Oh my goodness gracious
that child just ate a red orange!
But it was actually a frog-
(sorry, but nothing rhymes with orange).
~
How about that airplane food...?
Um, uh, it's uh- a kite.
Thanks ladies and gentlemen,
I'll be here all night.
~
I'm sorry if you're disappointed,
and this poem is hard to grapple.
I was so emotional, that I couldn't get myself
to talk about an apple.
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This was the most motivational poem i have ever read. (Sorry about the grammar in this review im using a device that doesnt have spell check or anything)
I have no idea what to tell you except... Wow and what? Is grapple a word? I think it is but you can never be too sure. There is the mistake "princes" instead of "princesses" in that one stanza. Unless you did that on purpose. I can see that.
Well good job. Youre nonsense is better writing than my heartfelt cries from my soul.
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I really like this! It was so random and funny! One thing though: did you mean to say "princes" or "princess"? I would think the latter. Still, I really enjoyed the randomness and it made me smile!
Hello Snazzy!
Well, quite obviously this is hard to review as far as content goes. Its quite simple and hilarious, and I love how interesting the rhymes are (especially when nothing rhymes with orange!) but I will do my best to try to write a good review.
I found one thing that stuck out to me, which was how you always started each sentence with a capital letter. This being said, in the very first stanza, you left off a period.
"Did you know that in
driveways you don't drive
In parkways you don't park,
(and one plus one is five)."
After the word drive, I feel like their should either be a period or the beginning of the next line should not be capitalized.
That's really all I could find. This poem is absolutely unique and hilarious, and I love the randomness within it. Excellent work, and keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.
Thanks for the review!
I"ll make the change right away. 
No problem!
BRUH. Lololololololololol