Hello, long time no see! It's me FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely night!
Lets start.
I to hate clocks they really are a pain, but like you said they are there to make out lives better, but I really go hate it when the alarm goes off in the morning to tell you to get up. I really like the humor behind this to, this is something I will come back to read when ever I'm feeling down and need a good laugh, you really amazed me with this poem.
But like you said in the end you need the clocks and deep down you no it.
Well sorry about the short review, everyone else did such a good job at pointing out the little things that needed to be fixed I didn't want to go over them with you. Anyway I really liked reading and reviewing your work, being able to tell you what I thought was really great! Post again soon. Have a great day or night.
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