Beauty
is
Something
we
Should
all
Believe
in.
Tomorrow
is
A
day
That
may
Never
come.
Live
Life
And
Believe
In
Forever.
Because
forever
May
be
In
your
Imagination
till
Kingdom
come
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It's time for a review!!!!!!!!!!
Wow this is a really cool little poem. Your formatting is awesome and the content of your writing is also amazing! You did a really great job and I hope to see more stuff like this from you!
Keep writing and good luck!!!
It's time for a review!!!!!!!!!!
Wow this is a really cool little poem. Your formatting is awesome and the content of your writing is also amazing! You did a really great job and I hope to see more stuff like this from you!
Keep writing and good luck!!!
well this doesn't really look like it should be reviewed. Cool formatting though .3.
The formatting is so fun!!
The formatting is so fun!!
Hello! InfiniteRectangles here with a brief review for you!
Okie dokie! So, first off, I like the creativity with the format. I personally love poems that are experimental in structure. I once wrote a poem about rain in the shape of an umbrella haha. Anyway! (sorry for getting a teeny bit off track. It happens :p) As I said I like the creative way you structured this and the poem itself is beautifully written. That being said, there were a couple of things that stood out to me.
At the beginning you said that we should all believe in beauty, but right afterwards you seemed to switch topics, going from believing in beauty to saying that tomorrow might never come. I understand the gist of what you were saying but maybe you should find a way to make the transition smoother and merge the topics so it doesn't feel so much like reading two completely separate poems.
The only other thing I noticed is that the last stanza seems a bit choppy in comparison to the rest of the poem. It doesn't flow as well. Maybe find a way to make it shorter and smoother.
All in all it was a very enjoyable poem! Keep writing and have a wonderful day/night! :3
thank you so much for your review