"Censorship"
'Fire!'
She screams.
'In the library!'
She grabs at each passer- by
Trying to get their attention.
Some people stop,
Look at her,
And shake their heads.
They know nothing but
What they see and that,
Makes her crazy.
'Please, oh please'
She cries,
'Save my books.'
And with each side-ways glance,
Her heart sinks.
The fire burns bright,
But only in her own mind
As each,
Blue uniformed arsonist
Slowly makes their way
Through the wooden oak doors.
In a rage of passion
She throws herself at them,
Screaming and baring
Her teeth.
Each pointed sharp
And dripping with venom.
Her eyes roll back,
Insider her head.
She looks chaotic,
Dangerous,
Feline.
With one snap of her jaw
She bites at their hands,
Trying to knock down their
Matches.
A shriek fills the night
As two of them reach out
And pluck her from
The others.
She is restrained,
Caged,
Locked away to watch
As they continued to
Destroy her home.
'Criminals'
She hisses,
'Bloody damn criminals'
And she rattles her chains.
It is only when,
They are finished burning,
That they release her.
Slowly,
As if each bone in her body
Is broken, she rises.
Her feet brush the ground
Covered in ash,
And she dances
And weeps,
Her tears hidden
By the rain.
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Its beautiful and amazing piece of writing i found here so far. Each line goes in a flow and it
beautifully describes the pain of a person who sees her home burning and she being a lady
finds no help. She just cant help crying and doing the best in every possible manner.
This poem has such an amazing feel that one can easily relate to this.
It describes the pain and suffering. The intensity of not been able to do anything by
choosing the appropriate word.
overall a very good attempt keep writing like this but dont ever stick to the saddest feelings
only i wish to see a poem next time with something related to the subject of happiness,
joyfulness and would see how you define it.
good day!
This was cool topic to write about and it's nice to see people's opinions
I encourage you to keep on making your points
Get you're message out there
Over all words you used made sense
Grammar looked nice
And meaning was heart felt
The words like weeps and be on and passion add allot too each line.
And you used detail
And descriptition
thank you for that, I am glad that you liked it. My English teacher said that I should submit this, so I here to find all of you guy's opinions before I made a decision. Again thank you.
No problem
I hope I keep in touch I can't wait to see more truthfully.