How fun!
I love the crazy words in here. They make this so jolly. <3
I've seen your SMSU poetry works hanging around and thought I'd give one a shot and review it. Unfortunately, there is a problem with that because I do not know who the people of these poems are. Sorry. Are they characters, perhaps, from a story of yours? Or am I completely wrong? Though... if the reader is supposed to know who the characters are, why did you describe Nayleth? Yet the others I remain clueless on.
The line "Joyfully jabbing jamming Griffin" is the only one that gave me pause. It doesn't make sense. Jamming? While jabbing? I am confusion. But hey, this jolliness is all wrapped up in the ending line: "Just being me." However. Who is "me"?
I hope this review wasn't too irritating, and I wish you the best of luck in your future works.
Happy Review Day! Goooo Team Cranberries!
~rosette
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