Maybe time will tell,
And nothing evil shall dwell.
Really though, its like she won't know.
Kindly do I try, to make sure no one knows.
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Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!
Maybe time will tell,
Give me your soul.With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
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And nothing evil shall dwell.
Really though, it{'}s like she won't know.
Kindly do I try, to make sure no one knows. {CONSIDER MY INTEREST PEAKED}
My interpretation:
what interpretation? also I already know what's going to happen mwuahahaha
Overall:
what do you think I'm going to say? I liked it! THE FORESHADOWING HHHHh
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
omg consider my interest peaked that was gold
Hello Flumadddle! Wordwing here for a review!
So, first of all, I like the poem.
It's a nice little acrostic poem but it could be better
if you didn't make the last two lines awkward.
In the first 2: dwell, tell you made a rhyme and then
you made this: know, knows.
Honestly a was a liiiil' bit disappointed by that but ,hey, this is an acrostic.
Sincerely,
Wordwing
Hi! Izzy here for a review!
I really have liked these so far and I am on chapter four of SMSU!!!!!!!
I feel like this is more about how the character is feeling, than who the character is.
They feel like they have to keep a secret (??) and they are hiding something evil from someone (???)
I may be wrong, (I'm wrong) but hey, I tried!
ONTO CHAPTER FIVE!!!
Izzy
They are indeed keeping a secret. Both Jesse and Mark. Read Jesse poem.
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