Music Loving Ghost

Thanks for the invitation!

You have a really unique idea. I haven't seen many poems written in this form. However, this style does come with its own restrictions and challenges. The main problem here is that there is simply no detail. You rely very heavily on broad emotions. You manage to outline the mood of your work but not much else, leaving the reader with a vague sense of what your trying to get across.

This problem stems from the acrostic style. I am not trying to dissuade you from writing poems the way you see fit, rather I am simply outlining what you must be wary of when writing in this style. You must be specific, giving your audience details: who what when where etc.

Thanks again!

I love how this is put together. This is fantastic! I love how you used lonely and not like ghost of something. I love acrostic poems, and this is my favorite one now!! You did great on the punctuation and italics.

Hullo, it's me again! As I always mention, I know nothing about poetry and I am terrible at it, so you don't have to take any of my advice, this is just how I feel.

Firstly, I love your style of writing and I like the fact that you chose to do an acrostic.
Second, I loved your use of italics. They gave the poem character and more impact.
I usually have a difficult time with non-rhyming poems, but I didn't notice in this poem at all because it flowed so nicely.

I don't really have anything negative to say on this. I thought you got your point across poetically and clearly. It was straightforward in a way, but not boring at all. I really liked it, keep it up!

I know I didn't have anything really constructive to say. But I hope you found this helpful in some way. XD thanks for taking the time to read my review.
-Anne <3

Hey. Here for a quick review!

Loneliness is a complex and usually unpleasant emotional response to isolation. Loneliness typically includes anxious feelings about a lack of connection or communication with other beings, both in the present and extending into the future. As such, loneliness can be felt even when surrounded by other people. The causes of loneliness are varied and include social, mental, emotional and physical factors.

Research has shown that loneliness is prevalent throughout society, including people in marriages, relationships, families, veterans, and those with successful careers. It has been a long explored theme in the literature of human beings since classical antiquity. Loneliness has also been described as social pain—a psychological mechanism meant to motivate an individual to seek social connections. Loneliness is often defined in terms of one's connectedness to others, or more specifically as "the unpleasant experience that occurs when a person's network of social relations is deficient in some important way".

This piece talks about how loneliness makes you feel. You've been too lonely that you no longer recognize your own self..

Nice one keep it up!

hello, Ash here for a review
YES, THE ACROSTIC POEM IS BACK LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT YESSSS
okay now into the actual review.
I Feel like the use of italics in each line makes this poem a little more impactful so great job there.
the acrostic part of this added more meaning to all of it, and I think this poem could definitely be interpreted in a couple of different ways.
there doesn't to seem to be any grammar mistakes, but someone else may notice something.
overall I think this is an amazing and relatable poem, as per usual.
wonderful job pal.
I look forward to seeing more from you in the future
have a wonderful day and happy valentines day!
>Ash

I said this on the WFP, and I'll say it again. I'm sorry you feel this way. I know that sometimes you can't fix it, but at least come to me and vent about your problems, I would only comment on things that I feel are important. So, stay you sis! Imma be here, being a........nevermind!XDXXDXDXD

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