Just jumping jubilantly,
Joyfully justifying Sully's jollifications,
Just jitterbugging with Nayleth, a jittering, jeweled scaled person,
Joyfully jabbing jamming Griffin.
Just being me.
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How fun!
Though... if the reader is supposed to know who the characters are, why did you describe Nayleth? Yet the others I remain clueless on.
I love the crazy words in here. They make this so jolly. <3
I've seen your SMSU poetry works hanging around and thought I'd give one a shot and review it. Unfortunately, there is a problem with that because I do not know who the people of these poems are. Sorry. Are they characters, perhaps, from a story of yours? Or am I completely wrong?
The line "Joyfully jabbing jamming Griffin" is the only one that gave me pause. It doesn't make sense. Jamming? While jabbing? I am confusion. But hey, this jolliness is all wrapped up in the ending line: "Just being me." However. Who is "me"?
I hope this review wasn't too irritating, and I wish you the best of luck in your future works.
Happy Review Day! Goooo Team Cranberries!
~rosette
Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!
Just jumping jubilantly,
Give me your soul.With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overall
Strikethrough= removeUnderline = krazy Kara komments.
Spoiler
Joyfully justifying Sully's jollifications,
Just jitterbugging with Nayleth{ - }a
jittering,jeweled{,} scaled person,Joyfully jabbing
jammingGriffin.Just being me.
My interpretation:
Awwwwwwwww
Overall:
I loved this! This shows so much of J's character! I really hope that she becomes a badass
mods I dunno other synonyms for this word so don't get madin the future of your bookWhy haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
pfffft. I already knew I wanted her to be a badass. But her importance... that grow.
Hi! Izzy here for a review!
I have to take a test in like four minuets so here we go!
I really like that the poem is very upbeat, but I also know, with you, it's never upbeat.
I like this okay yup bye!
Izzy
YOU KNOW TO MUCH
HISSSSSS
Don't hiss at me you snake!
I AM NO SLYTHERIN
IS THAT A HARRY POTTER REFERENCE??
I AM A SLYTHERIN
AND RAVENCLAW
FITE ME
MY SECOND OR THIRD HOUSE IS SLYTHERIN GOSHH
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