Do you ever think that being... different is a curse?
Indeed, things could be worse.
For there are some that make themselves so plain,
For all they feel is the pain.
Even though weird is good, why do we still try to be so normal?
Round and round this world goes, chasing what they still don't know.
Eventually, the dull will see, just how bright our world can be.
Now and again, we may wonder about the unique,
To what do we owe this wonderful pleasure is life's greatest critique.
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Hullo E.E! Cat here to review this wonderful poem! Okay then, here we go!
Do you ever think that being... different is a curse? (Yes...)
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First, let's go through your poem together (Anything in bold is my comments/suggestions/grammar help):
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Indeed, things could be worse.
For there are some that make themselves so plain,
For all they feel is the pain.
Even though weird is good, why do we still try to be so normal? (Ikr)
Round and round this world goes, chasing what they still don't know. (True!)
Eventually, the dull will see, just how bright our world can be.
Now and again, we may wonder about the unique,
To what do we owe this wonderful pleasure is life's greatest critique.
What I liked: I loooooooooooove how smooth the poem is and the rhymes!
What to fix grammar/spelling wise: Uh... nothing!
Plot holes/confusing stuff: So as much as the flow was on point, there were a couple line that didn't make sense as a sentence. Granted, I know poems don't follow the normal structure of sentences, but some just didn't make any sense. Particularly the 3rd and last line. I would read it out loud, if you stumble at understanding it, then I would change it a bit so it makes sense.
Other random comments: Wow! You are really good at writing poems! (And please tag me when you post a new one!
Well anyways, great poem! Good job and keep writing!
Thank you! You can check out my other poems in my portfolio.
So this is a cool poem and its awesome.
Thanks!
Hey it's Izzy and you know that so let's move on!
*looks at previous reviews*
huh
no one reviewed this before me
cool
Anyway, I like this because it's you, and it's weird (not in a bad way, in the best possible way!)
This is very beautiful and just yeah.
I'm bad at reviews you should know this by now.
I will not try to define the meaning because I am bad at that.
You did awesome!
Izzy
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