Moths.
Annoying,
Ugly,
Scary Moths.
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Humans.
Pretty,
Calm,
Smart Humans.
---
Moths.
Fuzzy,
Adorable,
Dog-like Moths.
---
Humans.
Monstrous,
Terrifying,
Anger-ridden Humans.
---
This world is different,
From every page you enter.
Be it of the little guys,
Or the ones on top.
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AHHHHH YOU POSTED IT YAY
I LOVE THIS POEM A LOT PAL
THANKS YOU
This is adorable! <3
Thanks!
It's Joel, comming at cha with a review. Also... hi.
I like the flipped perspectives. Why is there no bolded phrase in the first stanza. Why is the last adjective and not the second adjective the bolded line in the 4th stanza? Why'd you use page instead as the chosen symbol in the last stanza when the last 2 lines haven't much to do with pages, unless it's a reference to the poem? Also, what do you think of a review in the forms of questions?
I like the review in forms of questions. Its new.
woot. Hooray for original content! lol
For sure
Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!
Moths.
Give me your soul.With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overall
Strikethrough= removeUnderline = krazy Kara komments.
Spoiler
Annoying,
{u}gly,
{s}cary {m}oths.
---
{remove this "enter"}
Humans.
Pretty, {**COUGH I'M NOT PRETTY COUGH OH WAIT COUGH I'M NOT HUMAN COUGH}
{c}alm,
{s}mart {h}umans.
---
Moths.
Fuzzy,
{a}dorable,
{d}og-like {m}oths. {Usually, "dog-like" is a bad thing"}
---
Humans.
Monstrous,
{t}errifying,
{a}nger-ridden {h}umans.
---
This world is different,
{with} every page you enter.
{b}e it of the little guys
,{o}r the ones on top.
My interpretation:
This is about the comparison between moths and humans.
Overall:
Overall, I liked. It produces the correct imagery for the interpretation that I had created. However, I want to teach you that you don't have to capitalize every single line in the poem. Honestly, it's actually more grammatically correct that way, and I know how you are
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
Yeah, I like correct grammar. :3 And thanks!
I JUST POSTED THIS WHO LIKED IT WHO SHOW YOUR FACE
HI I LIKED IT.
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