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You know,
You can't understand him.
You never fucking will.
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Hey, I need you to just, just please,
Don't let them get to you.
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Hey, you,
I need you to not blame him,
For the things that he can't fucking control.
I need you to clear your damn mind.
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Please Sam,
Please,
Keep your head held up so damn high.
But don't make me the complete center of your world.
Let your family in too.
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Hey, you,
I need you to get yourself together.
I know what you are talking about,
But do not compare your damn pain to his.
An arrow, can be a bushel to another.
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I need you to clear your head,
To give your family some attention too.
I need you to know that I am on your side.
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Murphy here for a review. I think this is a very powerful piece. I really get the sense you are reaching out which says a lot about you as a person. I know it is hard to talk to family about certain things. There are things about my life that my family knows nothing about. I some times wish I had said something but the other half of me says they wouldn't understand. I admire your strength on putting this out there.
Just thought I'd put that out there.
I really don't think I have any critiques. The poem speaks loud and clear and it hits a place in my heart. Well done!
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