Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
I don't need an interpretation??
Overall:
I did like this poem. What did Grim think about it? A bit strange grammatically, but otherwise it was good! Keep up the great work.
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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