Wait so is the house the animal in your mind?
I love how you left so much to interpritation so it can mean something different to everyone who reads it. I also really like the almost foreboding sound this story has to it. The person before me has done a lot better giving you technical help but I want to say I like how it's almost seems like a rough draft, it's raw, it's different. The style really goes with the animal thing, do you know what I mean.
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