If Words were Watercolor Balloons Poetry
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Green skin, glass eyes
I get to attached to random little creatures...
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When the sweet child swims
Wrote it for a horror prompt in English. I would love feedback on structure especially.
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If words were watercolor balloons
Artistic visions
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The Sound of Inspiration
Experimenting with synesthesia, feedback greatly appreciated!
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Candle-lit Eyes
Trying out a more nature-y theme. Reviews appreciated!
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Old Films
1st round of NaPoWriMo
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Iniquities
who knew anatomy physiology class could be inspirational?
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Finding the Words
An adventure, of sorts.
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Let the World Stay Dark
About my favorite part of the day
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Smoldering
Just a poem about hiding your anger. Reviews are very much needed.
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Following the instructions
If you're picky about structure and capitalization/punctuation in poetry, don't bother with this one. Other than those, criticism appreciated.
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Here's to
Here's to hoping this poem get's lots of reviews!
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Petals
I'll happily stay.
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Something about it
Please feel free to tear this apart, I'm desperately in need of criticism and help here.
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Ineffable
Who's good at making something out of nothing? I am!
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Astronomy
trying to get better at simple yet complex poetry
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Axis
getting over things, and realizing it isn't so bad after all
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Water Nymph
A poem to give strength to a struggling friend with a hard choice to make.
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Azaleas
Let's make some more nature metaphors
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My Heart a Goldfinch
“may my heart always be open to little birds who are the secrets of living whatever they sing is better than to know" -E.E. Cummings
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Rewind
We all fall down
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She who loves the sun
Nature-y and not overbearingly romantic. I need reviews, please!
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Paired
oh, but for hands
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Grey as running Ink
Something I thought of while standing out in the cold rain. Reviews appreciated.
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Bring to a slow boil
Just a little poem about waiting for love. I would love feedback, please!
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Why do I leave her? (Edited)
Wrote this about an artwork of mine
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When the Robins lift
please give plenty of feedback, I'm not sure about this one yet.
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The Contemplation
They really need some new genre selections, like "massive ponderings of the world"
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Confessions of a Ruby-Toed Nobody
Please criticize freely, but do keep in mind that I'm fully aware of the lack of periods at the end of sentances.
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Godly
Don't attack me, please.
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The stars, dirt and dark
my three favorite poets
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Tchotchkes
Tchotchkes: knick-knacks, trinkets, often thought of as useless, tacky
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The easier path
Please be liberal with the constructive criticism
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Brightness of the Night
"Dreams are illustrations from the book your soul is writing about" -Marsha Norman
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The Dust of Time
Please be liberal with criticism and suggestions!
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For, when we are not creating(EDITED)
About inspiration, or lack thereof
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Three(Rhyme Scheme Fixed)
the effects of parents fighting
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Cranium Cage
Just one of those poems that come to you, when the words just seem to flow.
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The course of events, as it goes
You all know one of these people.
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Behind it all
You may think you know a person
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The wind and the tree
What sweet lovers, the wind and the tree.
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Why the Long Face?
It's really rough right now, but I needed to get it off my chest. Reviews welcome.
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The Differences Between the Seasons
Summer love v. winter love
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Small Acts of Rebellion
A poem about my first time leaving campus for lunch, when I definitely wasn't supposed to.
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Untitled Notes to the Night
short sad poem snippets
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So Many Ways to Burn
Who knows? Guess you'll have to read it to find out, eh?