Hello, my friend!
Such a brilliant and emotional poem you've created here. The opening lines draw the reader in with curiosity; what is this turning point, and where is it leading? Then, on to discover a hard cycle of self-reflection and deep existential questions. How even during good times, demons can still come back to haunt you, and it feels like something is "wrong" and that you're not being heard. I can definitely glean that struggle from these lines, and overall, I'm impressed by the beautiful art that you've made from such a negative experience ~
For recommendations, I couldn't really think of any! The content really was great, and so was the structure of the poem. I noticed a fellow reviewer mention that it could be a nice addition to glean some of these mentioned worries or insecurities, and I agree it would be a good addition, but not essential.
~ Of course, I am no professional either way, so please take any opinion or advice from me with a grain of salt ~
Overall, you did a wonderful job!
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Reviews: 231
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