Hi dear CaptainSaltWater!!
This is Eros to review your another work!!
I read your poem " Love Song". This is a beautiful song dedicated to your love. It is been expressed in a very beautiful way. It is indeed a very romantic poem.
The first stanza tells us about the person you love. It describes the beauty of your love in a sweet manner.
The second stanza of your poem tells us about the special place of the special person in your heart. It describes about the eyes being lovely and the red hair of the person.
The next stanza says that the person means everything for you. What else to say?
The third stanza says that your love is immense and true and it is indeed inevietable and no none can seperate you.
In short this is a poem of a deep meaning.It is a sweet poem with three sweet stanzas in it. I also loved the way of seperating the stanzas bu a small hyphen. the poem flows very fluently and as far as I can see that there is no flaw in your superb poem.
Please keep writing for we love to read to read the writings!!
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