Straight from the beginning I could tell this was a free-form poem, no rhyme scheme. Which, in my opinion, is perfectly fine and different from most of what people imagine as poetry.
What I disliked about this was that it stated strictly obvious things. There seemed to be no meaning behind this poem, which is what poetry is really meant to do. Because of this lack of theme, lack of moral, I believe this poem, although good, was hindered in how good it could possibly be. Perhaps with an addition of this, it could be much better.
Points: 300
Reviews: 10
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