Hello my fellow writer, and reviewer. It's me again IcyFieryPhoenix with another review for you, so let's get to it.
Gosh Ala you do no how to get mad and show everyone that you are. I must say when she called Tiana a Butt I started canning myself, I didn't see that happening. Though with that bit I think you should have added Tiana's reaction to her outburst. It would have added a little more to the chapter, and I'm sure knowing Tiana she will have something to say after being called a Butt.
I thought the teachers reaction was very well done, she sound like she is very strict and doesn't take any trouble in her class, and it shows up that she is someone you can go to for help, so maybe Ala can talk to her later.
AWW! Henry aren't you sweet joining your friend in the corner. Now that's true friendship, and maybe just maybe LOVE!!
Gosh there are so many things happening at the moment! I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter, so many things can happen at the moment, it's that part of the story where you don't no where it's going to go. So I will be off to the next chapter, I look forward to it. I hope you have a great day or night either one is fine, and keep writing.
Your friend and faithful reader
FlamingPhoenix.
Reviewing with a fiery passion!
Ps: Post chapter 11 I'm getting closer and I have a feeling chapter ten is going to be left on a cliffhanger!
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