Authors note: I did this in SECOND GRADE!!! I haven't changed a single word, even my spelling errors are still there. I have improved. (Hopefully) With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
Once, there lived a queen and king named Dawn and Cloud it was just enyother day when dawn announced that she was Pregnet. a few months later she had her children. The oldest by a minute was Summer then Lillyena and Lillyana then Luna and both smallest and youngest, Peace
about 10 years later Dawn and Cloud went to a iland called Sunny bay, but they ever returned this ment whoever got the Bowencrown would be queen Lillyena, Luna, and Peace never cared about being Queen, but the Bowencrown ment Queen, Summer bragged that she would be Queen cause she was oldest. When they were five, Summer would take there dolls wich ade then upset espesily Lillyena, She would cry till sunset. but peace, just like her name, would peacefully go up to Dawn and tell and get her and her sisters dolles back
When the girls were old enough to be Queen, Summer created hot stuff with one touch, you would turn to ashes, she made Lava, TNt, and Suns She and her followers perpared for battel, peace had a diffent plan.
Peace knew that her sisters dolls each had a secret simble on it tha yo cant see but hers dident. that's how she figerd out her plan each sister had one exept her and her bow was hamess so she had to shoot her sisters at the time
What this was supposed to do was to bring Dawn and Cloud back but ii brang something els back
PEACE
When peace picked up the Arrow she turned to the next page in her storyhood,
QUEEN
for the bow Dawn gave her, was no ordinary bow, for Nomore a land of war but a land of peace, and that bow was the legendary bowencrown,
And that's where it ends. With the epic plot twist revealed, young Horisun pat herself on the back and proceeded to show all her friends and family her epic masterpiece, and now, to YWS. I remember being so proud of this. Now... Well, lets say I hope I've gotten better. Its actually really important to me, because its when I first thought to myself, Hay, I thing I'm going to be a writer. And here I am now. In case your interested, I actually did start a second book. I didn't finish it, but I wonder where this would have gone if I did. (Stops writing to shake that thought away.) I hope you enjoyed my younger selves masterful writing skills!
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