Wesh! Jade her to review you. Let's just get to it, then!
I really love your randomosity and lighthearted humorous poem.
I think the flow could be fixed, and there is no stanzas which I recommend adding.
The word choice for some of it could be better:
You can't change the fact that I lie of my name
Maybe change of to about, of is,'t incorrect, it just sounds odd.
But I like this so much! I hope this helps..
-Professor Jadey
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