I really, really love this poem! You used beautiful imagery and metaphors... it was simply well-written. You did an amazing job at conveying emotions to the reader... I could really feel the sadness of this poem.
The only typo I noticed was in line 4... did you mean "throne"?
Anyway, this overall idea of this poem is really well thought out and spoken. I'd love to read more of your work!
Well done!
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